Lance has managed in 2 parts of this story to really engulf me as a reader. He is providing a great story backed by great special effects and environments.
Everything one could hope for in a dio story is present here. His customs that he showcases in his story are top notch work. The environments really sell the locations and his use of photo editing software to provide motion and emotion sell this story fast.
The characters in his story work well for the Indy verse. He has some Russians and some Japanese as the main antagonists. Other characters are shown as well including the typical Indy sidekick female.
I really enjoy this story and think the readers will as well.
I would like to thank Lance Quazar for sharing his work, and I would like to thank the readers.